The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the bar chart is data pertaining to the quality of
visitors
in 3 specific New York airports from 1995 to 2000. The unit
are measured in millions.
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Overall
, it can be observed that the La Guardia
airport
increased in the number of visitors
through out
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throughout
while
the other two airports flutuated
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fluctuated
an
upward in their Correct article usage
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figures
. Additionally
, it should also
be noted that La Guardia
airport
was
recorded the highest number of Unnecessary verb
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visitors
during the timeframe with one exception in the year 1997.
Examining the figures
more closely, it is clear that
La Guardia
airport
started with nearly 35 million
visitors
in 1995. Then
the figures
witnessed a general growth through to 1999 when it had 50 million
visitors
before reaching at
the top in 2000 with approximately 70% and still recording as the Change preposition
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airport
with the most visitors
.
With regards to the remaining data, it can be seen that John F. Kennedy had about 26 million
travellers in 1995 then
went up to around 48 million
when it replaced La Guardia
airport
, becoming the most visited airport
in 1997 but its figures
dipped to just over 30 million
in 1998 and 1999 before going up again in 2000 with roughly 44 million
visitors
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