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The pie charts belows show the percentage of students on the one adult education centre taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year.

The pie charts belows show the percentage of students on the one adult education centre taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year.
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depict
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proportion
propotion
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proportion
 of
students
 enrolling in various majors at an adult institution in 1985 compared to the present year
Overall
, enrollment in local history and music appreciation has completely disappeared in the current year,
while
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proportion
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proportion
of
students
 in other courses has generally declined In more detail, in 1985, modern languages were the most popular major, attracting nearly one-fourth of the
students
.
This
 was followed by fitness and dance, which accounted for 22% of the student body, and art, with precisely 17%. Both cookery and local history each represented a quarter of the student population,
whereas
 music appreciation was chosen by only 8% of
students
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contrast
, today’s figures show that IT has become the most popular major. With exactly 27% of
students
 enrolled. The percentage of
students
 in fitness and dance has remained steady at 22%, and cookery has increased, nearly reaching 20%. Meanwhile, enrollment in art and modern languages has decreased
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