The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.

The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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of skilled
migrants
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in various occupations who moved to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
Overall
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, the data shows a trend of
decline
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in skilled migration across all professions during
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period. The
number
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of skilled
migrants
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across various professions in Australia has decreased from 2009 to 2012. Mental
workers
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and Machinists had the most significant
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,
while
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“Software and Telecommunications Engineers” and “Computer Professionals remained more steady. In 2009, there were more skilled
migrants
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in all the listed professions compared to 2012.
In particular
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, there were around 28,000 professionals in mental
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and machinists” in 2009,
whereas
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this
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number
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dropped to nearly 17,000 in 2012.
Similarly
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, “Cooks” saw a
decline
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from 22,000 to 15,000
migrants
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during the same period. The largest profession among skilled
migrants
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throughout the four years was “Metal
workers
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and Machinists”.
However
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, it
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witnessed the steepest
decline
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. Software
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and
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Telecommunications Engineers” and “Computer Professionals”
although
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starting with a lower
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of
migrants
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compared to “Metal
workers
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and Machinists”, remained relatively stable throughout the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, migrants, decline, workers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration patterns
  • Occupation categories
  • Significant growth
  • Labor shortages
  • Booming industries
  • Visa regulations
  • Job market saturation
  • Economic downturns
  • Skill shortages
  • Economic contribution
  • Infrastructure pressure
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic predictions
  • Policy changes
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