The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in ive different universities studied.

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in ive different universities studied.
Contained in the two
barcharts
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bar charts
are data relating to
studying
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hours
of
students
in five distinctive
univerities
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universities
which
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at
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on
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weekdays
and at
weekends
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of
hours
at
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weekdays
remained slightly unchanged,
whereas
there was a decline at
weekends
. It can be
also
observed that
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university
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C
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at
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weekdays
and
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university
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A at
weekends
have the topmost proportion of
hours
that
students
studied,
while
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university
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D's
hours
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were
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was
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were
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the smallest in
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the two
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two
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the two
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charts. Beginning with
weekdays
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weekday
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rates, it is evident that they were far higher than
weekends
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weekend
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rates. With 10.6,
hours
of studying in
university
C is the highest
of
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the chart.
This
is
in contrast
with
university
D where
students
spent at least
hours
of studying, with 9.6.
This
is followed by
unversity
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university
B,
university
E and
university
A with
espective
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respective
figures being 10.1, 10 and 9.8. Turning to
weekends
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rates, it can be observed that
students
spent the most in
university
A, at 9. The noticeable point is
that
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a fluctuation in
university
D, it dropped down to 5.6 which was the lowest of the charts.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, students, weekdays, weekends, university with synonyms.
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