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tend to arrange,shops,schools officers and homes in specific areas is a recurring argument.

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writer argues that

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them in specific areas to easy to find them and

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all

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biulings

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buildings

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easy to find them.

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,

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find

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building faster.From prior knowledge,

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find and

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shop for various

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and

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get high profits. Spending less

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also

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find and spend less

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customers.

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all

buildings

together can make the most convenient for individuals.

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,by using

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others

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building

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using

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their business.

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time

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the businessman

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businessman

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first. Taking all

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into account,

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all

buildings

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separating

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them for each

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buildings

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