the pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009
The pie chart provides information about the
reasons
for immigration.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is clearly obvious that accompanying family was the main reason
why many individuals came to a European
country
, while
a definite job
was the leading factor for immigrants from a European
nation in 2009.
To begin
with, accompanying
family takes up 25% of all immigrants, followed by the Add an article
the accompanying
an accompanying
reason
for a definite job
which was 2% less. The explanation for looking for a new job
was 15%, which had the same percentage as reasons
for study and others. The number of people who moved to a European
country
with
no Change preposition
for
reason
was 7%.
For immigrants who moved from a European
country
, a definite job
overtook accompanying family to become the major factor in immigration from a European
country
, accounting for 38%. Following that was 23% for other reasons
, which was 8% higher than reasons
for accompanying family and 10% higher than looking for jobs. The percentages for study and no particular reason
accounted for the lowest figures at 7% and 4%.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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