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The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.

The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
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The bar chart shows the data about the telephone calls in the UK from 1995 to 2002 by category.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the call type which had more calls was a local-fixed line, in the meantime, the category which had the lowest number of calls was Mobiles even if it had a noticeable rise during that period of time.
Firstly
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, in 1995, the top-ranked line was local as it had approximately 70
billion
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 of calls,
whereas
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, national and international had only 35
billion
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 which is more than mobiles with 3
billion
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. The next year each category had a slight increase and remained in the same position.
However
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, in 1998 and 1999, local calls had equal results of 90
billion
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 and in 2000
this
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 number fell to 85.
Secondly
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, in 2001, national and international calls went up dramatically to 60
billion
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,meanwhile, local had a reduction to 70. In 2002, mobiles had a huge growth to 45
billion
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