The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevent.
The bar graph illustrates details about the weekly budget for families in one region in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it is obvious that food spending's
was the highest in 1968. Meanwhile, the money spent Change the noun form
spendings
spending
for
leisure activities in 2018 had increased.
In 2018, money spent on food had a dramatic downward trend in comparison to Change preposition
on
to
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apply
year
of 1968. In 1968 it reached 35%, Change the article
the year
While
in 2018 it was roughly 18%. Second
top payments in 2018 were Correct article usage
The second
Housing
, transport and leisure activities ranging between over 10% to 23%.
Other than food in 1968, people did not Change preposition
for Housing
not
spend money on vehicles fuel, shopping or groceries. It all fluctuated from 5% to 10%.Remove the redundancy
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