The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. 

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The table and pie graphs illustrate details of the money spent by the police between 2017 to 2018 in the UK. The table graph
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details about the three sources and the Pie chart shows how the money
spent
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.
Overall
,
the
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all 3 sources of police budget in 2018 had increased even if it was a slight
rose
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To begin
with, the table shows the three sources for the police budget from 2017 to 2018.
It is clear that
taxes had a dramatic jump from 91.2 m to 102.3 m in 2018. In comparison to
National
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Government and the other stuff, there was a slow climb. Looking at the Pie graph, the highest amount of money spent
on
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both years was
for
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salaries
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75% for the year
of
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2017 and 69% for the year of 2018. Meanwhile,
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and transport
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for both years remained steady
by
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17%.
Furthermore
, looking at Technology it increased gradually by roughly 6%.
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