The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The table and pie graphs illustrate details of the money spent by the police between 2017 to 2018 in the UK. The table graph
give
details about the three sources and the Pie chart shows how the money Change the verb form
gives
spent
.
Add a missing verb
was spent
Overall
, the
all 3 sources of police budget in 2018 had increased even if it was a slight Remove the article
apply
rose
.
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rise
To begin
with, the table shows the three sources for the police budget from 2017 to 2018. It is clear that
taxes had a dramatic jump from 91.2 m to 102.3 m in 2018. In comparison to National
Government and the other stuff, there was a slow climb.
Looking at the Pie graph, the highest amount of money spent Correct article usage
the National
on
both years was Change preposition
in
for
salaries Change preposition
on
by
75% for the year Change preposition
apply
of
2017 and 69% for the year of 2018. Meanwhile, Change preposition
apply
Buildings
and transport Correct article usage
the Buildings
percentage
for both years remained steady Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
by
17%. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, looking at Technology it increased gradually by roughly 6%.Submitted by a-la-a-11 on
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