The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The featured pie graphs compare the changes
about
schools' Change preposition
in
expenditure
in UK
from 1981 to 2001.
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the UK
Overall
, the consumption in
other workers' salaries saw a downward over the 30 years, Change preposition
of
while
insurance experienced the
Correct article usage
a
differenet
tendency. Correct your spelling
different
However
, expenditure
on other aspects fluctuated during that period of time.
It is clear from the chart that teacher's salaries took up the heighest
proportion with 40% in 1981, increased to 50% in 1991, but Correct your spelling
highest
finally
fell to 45% in 2001. Similarly
, the percentage of consumption in resources
books had the same change, with 15%, 20% and 9% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
resource
In contrast
to the expenditure
in
furniture and equipment, that figure started Change preposition
on
with
15%, dropped to only 5% and climbed Change preposition
at
at
23% in 2001.
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to
Additionally
, schools paid fewer
money to workers expect teachers over the Correct quantifier usage
less
20
years. The proportion of those workers payment was 28% in 1981, but that figure for 2001 became 15%. Correct word choice
last 20
By contrast
, the percentage of expenditure
on insurance increased steadily from 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001.Submitted by 1356388645 on
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