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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period
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The given table illustrates the data about
the
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rubbish manufacturing in six areas during the twenty years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
top ranked
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 country which produced a huge amount of waste is the US, in the meantime,the lowest result was demonstrated by Ireland.
In addition
, when Korea had a noticeable decrease , other countries had a significant rise during that period of time.
Firstly
, in 1980, America had 131
million
,
whereas
 Portugal had only 2
million
 of trash.
However
, in 1990, Portugal went up to 3
million
,
nonetheless
, it was the smallest rate
at
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 that year. The second place which had a great number of waste is Japan with 28
million
, but
then
 it grew to 32
million
 in 1990.
Secondly
, in 2000, Japan overtook Korea by 53
million
, as at that time Korea had a huge reduction to 19
million
,
while
 others had a serious increase.
Additionally
, Ireland had
a
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5
million
, meanwhile, Poland had that result in 1990.
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