The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after a mall was constructed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
map
illustrates the changes in the neighbourhood when they dug a mall into it.
Overall
, as the map
shows the renovation plans includes
adding a shopping centre to the neighbourhood Correct subject-verb agreement
include
along with
making a bit of changes around the houses.
To begin
with, as it
seen in the first Correct pronoun usage
apply
map
the neighborhood was sorrounded
by houses on both Main Correct your spelling
surrounded
street
and Oak Capitalize word
Street
street
. Capitalize word
Street
In addition
to that, there was a park, a lake in the middle of the park with footwear
shop and a bookshop store.
In comparison to the first Correct article usage
a footwear
map
we can see that there were a lot of changes in the second map
, they built a mall and took away both the woods and the park. They added two parking lots, a large one below the shopping centre and between the streets.Submitted by a-la-a-11 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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