The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
This
bar chart displays the sum of calls by telephone from 1995 to 2002. The usage in three different groups, the fixed line
in local, national and global, and mobile calls. It is clear from the graph that the local fixed line
is the most consuming one during the period.
According to
what is shown, the fixed line
which is the local one, was increasing by millions from 70 to 90. From 1996 to 1999, as is despite in the figure, it was steady. However
, the following year, it decreased to 85, and it remained declining until 2002.
While
the national and international fixed boundary was rasing
in a regular pattern over the 7 years. The Correct your spelling
raising
last
group which is the cell phone , started to increase by a little
percentage and Correct word choice
small
was
dramatically Verb problem
apply
rising
in the Wrong verb form
rose
last
three years 2000 to 2002.
To sum up
we could say, the
national and global fixed Correct word choice
that the
line
and mobile calls have increased all the years.Submitted by balqassab3 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words line with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼