The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The given bar chart illustrates the number of illiteracy by gender and region
in
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the end of
year
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.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of
females
is higher than
males
in all regions of the world.
In addition
, both genders in Latin American/Caribean and Developed countries nearly saw equal proportions of illiteracy. Looking at a group of regions which witnessed the higher rates of people who can not read or write a language, in South Asia, there are around 55%
females
and nearly 35%
males
.
Similarly
, more than 50% of women,
approximately
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30% of men in Arab States lack
this
ability.
Moreover
, Sub-Saharan Africa experiences about 48%
females
and over 30% Moving onto a lower group, East Asia/Oceania is similar to Developed countries with the proportion of
females
close to
males
. With the lowest percentage of illiteracy, Developed countries have only 1%
males
and 2%
females
,
while
Latin American/ Caribean saw 10% of women and about 12% of men.
Besides
, there is 20% of
males
higher than roughly 8% of
females
.
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