The charts show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graph compares the
number
of employees and students who used five means of transportation to go to univerity
in the years 2004 and 2009. Correct your spelling
university
Overall
, at the beginning of the period, most of
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people
used cars to go to the university
, but at the end
of the period, people
tended to use more buses. while
,
the lowest Remove the comma
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number
of people
use the train to travel to the university
.
In 2004, half of the students and employees preferred using cars to go to the university
, these figures dropped to 28%, in 2009. The second most popular method of transportation was the bus as 33% of the people
used it, which increased significantly, in 2009, to 46%. On the other hand
, 9% of people
use bicycles, whereas
the number
increased by 7% in 2009.
However
, walking to the university
was not a good choice for most of
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people
, only 3% tend to walk to the university
and this
percentage rose slightly to 6%, in 2009. The number
of people
who used the train was almost the same in 2004 and 2009 with a 1% difference.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
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