The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The following table and pie chart illustrate how many people
visit
Ashdown Wrong verb form
visited
museum
before and after renovation Capitalize word
Museum
along with
the
how Correct article usage
apply
satisfy
they are with the result of Change the form of the verb
satisfied
this
site
modernization.
Change noun form
site's
Overall
, the number of visitors soar after the museum
has been refurbished. This
is in line with the rise of their satisfaction towards the new face of the museum
.
In detail, there is a huge increase of
total Change preposition
in
tourists
after Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
Ashdown
Correct article usage
the Ashdown
Museum
has been modernized. It is about a quarter higher compared to the number of tourists it had before refurbishment. Meanwhile, among of
those people, the percentage of visitors who Change preposition
apply
was very satisfy
Change the verb form
was very satisfied
to
strolling around the Change preposition
with
museum
was just 15%, but it increases
to 35% nowadays because of the Wrong verb form
has increased
museum
renovation. In addition
, people who moderately satisfied is
Change the verb form
is also risen
also
rise by 10%. However
, there is a plunge of
the dissatisfied portion which Change preposition
in
fall
by 25%,Wrong verb form
fell
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