The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the Earth.
The diagram shows the
water
cycle,which is the continuous movement of water
on,above and provides the surface of the Earth.
This
process describes four steps,beginning with evaporation and concluding with surface runoff.
At first
lakes Add a comma
first,
to
turn Fix the infinitive
apply
water
vapour and ocean
contributes about 80% of Correct article usage
the ocean
total
Correct article usage
the total
water
vapour in air
.Add an article
the air
Then
water
vapour rises into the atmosphere,where it cools and condenses.
Following
this
,clouds formation and precipitation fall out where water
falls back to the Earth
surface in various forms Change noun form
Earth's
such
as rain or snow.
In the fourth Fix the agreement mistake
step
steps
runoff pass through groundwater.Add a comma
steps,
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