The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the Earth.
The diagram shows the
water
cycle,which is the continuous movement of
water
on,above and provides the surface of the Earth.
This
process describes four steps,beginning with evaporation and concluding with surface runoff. At
first
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first,
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lakes
to
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apply
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turn
water
vapour and
ocean
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the ocean
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contributes about 80% of
total
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the total
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water
vapour in
air
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the air
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.
Then
water
vapour rises into the atmosphere,where it cools and condenses.
Following
this
,clouds formation and precipitation fall out where
water
falls back to the
Earth
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Earth's
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surface in various forms
such
as rain or snow. In the fourth
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step
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steps
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steps,
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runoff pass through groundwater.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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