The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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major railway systems in the following cities: ( London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles).

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It is clear that

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London has the oldest railway system with the

lonest

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longest

lowest

Kilometers

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. Meanwhile, Kyoto has the shortest

Kilometers

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To begin

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with, London, Paris and Tokyo shared one thing which is the largest

capacity

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annually of ( 548, 850 and 1434

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) and the longest lengths of (1100, 594, 149)

Kilometers

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. In comparison to the other cities, Los Angeles had a larger

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milions

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million

with 14

kilometers

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in 2001. Washington DC was built in 1921 with a total length of 114

Kilometers

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and its annual

capacity

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was 70

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which was less than Los Angeles.

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, Kyoto had the same

Kilometers

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and the same

capacity

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of 11

Kilometers

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and 11

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only.

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May 28, 2024

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

139 words

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