The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table graph illustrates details
different
major railway systems in the following cities: ( London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles).
Change preposition
of different
Overall
, It is clear that
London has the oldest railway system with the lonest
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longest
lowest
Kilometers
. Meanwhile, Kyoto has the shortest Kilometers
.
To begin
with, London, Paris and Tokyo shared one thing which is the largest capacity
annually of ( 548, 850 and 1434 millions
) and the longest lengths of (1100, 594, 149) Change to singular
million
Kilometers
.
In comparison to the other cities, Los Angeles had a larger capacity
by
90 Change preposition
of
milions
with 14 Correct your spelling
million
kilometers
in 2001. Washington DC was built in 1921 with a total length of 114 Kilometers
and its annual capacity
was 70 millions
which was less than Los Angeles. Change to singular
million
However
, Kyoto had the same Kilometers
and the same capacity
of 11 Kilometers
and 11 millions
only.Change to singular
million
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