The picture shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, when people throw away the used

cans

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in the trash. The car that takes away the

cans

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will come to recycle it.

Then

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, the

cans

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will be cleaned,

sort

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,

shred

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shredded

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, and

compress

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compressed

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in the

machine

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. After it was put in the

machine

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, it was heated and melted to turn into a

roll

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again.

Then

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, the rolling will stick to the

cans

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, and the

cans

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are reused.

First,

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the

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people throw away the used

cans

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in the trash for recycling.

Second,

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the car will come to take away the used

cans

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for putting in the

machine

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. The

cans

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are

then

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put in the

machine

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for cleaning, sorting, shredding, and compressing.

Third,

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the

cans

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will be heated and melted to turn into a

roll

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. The

roll

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should be 2.5mm to 6mm thick.

Then

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, the

roll

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will be stuck around the

cans

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that are recycled.

Finally

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, the recycled

cans

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will be reused for selling again in the supermarket. There

are

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is

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74

percent

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per cent

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of

cans

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that

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apply

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are recycled in the UK.