The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the modifications that have taken place in one college site between the present and the projection in 2020.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are several facilities that will be built but some of them will disappear.
In addition
, many of them will be relocated or shrunk.
To begin
with, the reception size
is
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will be
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reduced size and moved to the middle of the college
while
a
Correct article usage
the
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library will swap its location with the bottom left classroom. Two new classrooms will be sprung up on the right side of the college.
Furthermore
, a toilet will be shifted to the top and a new shop added in the top left corner. What is interesting to see is the volume of classrooms shot up from 3 to 5.
Additionally
, both a bus stop and a main road remain
at
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in
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the same position. A
T shaped
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T-shaped
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footpath is demolished
as well as
a garden;
as a result
, parking lots will be expanded. What is interesting to note is the number of car parks
increases
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increased
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by 1.5 times, from 4 to 6.
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