The chart below shows the changes that took place in three various areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012.
The changes that
participated
in three various areas of crime in New Port city Verb problem
occurred
center
between 2003 and 2012 Change the spelling
centre
is
highlighted by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
given
line chart.
A glance at the line chart provided reveals that, in 2004, burglary was the most Correct article usage
the given
wide-spread
and outweighed the rate of car theft, which fell slightly. Correct your spelling
widespread
In addition
, the figure of
robbery was the lowest among the other types of crime over the Change preposition
for
period
shown.
In 2003, burglaries were at a rate of nearly 3500 per year. This
number then
peaked at 3750, after that dropped considerably at 1100 in 2008 and was remaining until the end of the period
. In contrast
, car thefts began the period
lower, dipped to 2000 and rose with minor numbers to 2750 in 2012. The least common was robbery. Statistics found over 500 robberies in 2003 and remaining under 1000 at this
period
of time, finishing at 750 in 2012.Submitted by Shaxnoza on
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