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The table below gives information on consumers spending on different items in five different countries in 2020.

The table below gives information on consumers spending on different items in five different countries in 2020.
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The expenditure of five countries Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on various products in 2020,
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 as food, clothing and
education
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 table. A glance at the table provided reveals that, it can be seen the highest consumer spending in five territories is food, drinks and tobacco.
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, it is three times higher than other categories. Leisure and
education
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 go down in these countries. Turkey spent the most at 32.14 %,
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 Sweden spent the least at 15.77 %. As for clothing and footwear, the largest proportion is Italy at 9 % compared to Sweden at 5.40 %, which is the smallest expenditure. The
last
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 category is leisure and
education
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, the average amount in given countries is lower than other products.
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, Spain only spent 1,98 % on leisure and
education
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 in 2020. But
this
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 country spent 18.80 % on food, drinks and tobacco and Turkey spent the biggest amount at 4.35 %.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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