In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Criminal books and TV
series
are being liked Use synonyms
in
an increasing number Change preposition
by
by
people globally. Change preposition
of
This
essay delves into the reasons behind Linking Words
this
growing trend and Linking Words
also
states why in my opinion they should be banned.
Linking Words
To begin
, humans are curious by nature and they love solving mysteries. Linking Words
Also
, they feel a sense of satisfaction, when they come to know that their conclusion was correct. Linking Words
This
is what Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
crime
books and TV shows provide their audience, a captivating story filled with suspense which people like to watch and solve. Use synonyms
For example
, Peaky Blinder, a show on Netflix, which had a mysterious criminal story, was the Linking Words
most watched
Add a hyphen
most-watched
series
on the platform. Use synonyms
Moreover
, criminal titles and programs Linking Words
gives
one a perspective of what is happening in Change the verb form
give
the
society and how to avoid Correct article usage
apply
such
unfortunate situations. Viewers get an insight Linking Words
of
a criminal’s mindset and Change preposition
into
keeps
them aware when they encounter a similar condition.
Change the verb form
keep
However
, I believe these Linking Words
crime
Use synonyms
series
and novels should be banned because they have a negative effect on a person’s thought process. They instil the criminal’s malicious behaviour in people’s Use synonyms
mind
, Fix the agreement mistake
minds
due to
which people may commit Linking Words
Use synonyms
crime
. Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
For instance
, a recent Sunday Times newspaper article showed how a teenager learnt various criminal tactics from a Netflix Linking Words
series
and harmed his girlfriend. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, watching and reading titles based on offensive acts Linking Words
make
an individual depressed and anxious. The person may think that Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
the
society has become unsafe to live but Correct article usage
apply
this
Linking Words
is
may not be the case.
In conclusion, Unnecessary verb
apply
although
Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
crime
books and TV programs are quite captivating and provide a thrilling experience to their audience, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
Add the comma(s)
however,
due to
the aforementioned arguments they should be banned.Linking Words
Submitted by niravfb1987 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
The essay should provide clearer individual arguments in support of its claims. The points made are good but could use more detail and specific examples to strongly support the arguments.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that every paragraph contains a clear, single idea that is supported by examples and analysis. The introduction and conclusion are present, but the main body paragraphs need more solid connections between ideas for better cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Make sure that the essay sentences and paragraphs flow logically. Use more connecting words and phrases to create a smoother transition between ideas and paragraphs.
task achievement
The essay clearly addresses the prompt and discusses the popularity of crime novels and TV shows by elaborating on the reader's curiosity, enjoyment of suspense, and the insight provided into criminal minds.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are strong and clearly indicate the intent and summary of the essay. There is a logical structure in presenting the problem and giving a personal opinion.