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The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the
demand
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 for different types of fibers in the textile industry from 1980 to 2015, focusing on four variants:
polyester
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, cotton,
cellulosic
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, and
wool
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. From 1980 to 1995, cotton had the highest
demand
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 among these fibers.
However
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,
polyester
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 took over as the most demanded fiber for the remaining years.
According to
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 the data,
polyester
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 experienced significant growth in global
demand
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 from 1995 to 2015, increasing from 20
million
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tons
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 to 65
million
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tons
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. Cotton followed, reaching 35
million
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tons
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.
Cellulosic
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 and
wool
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 exhibited similar trends: in 1980,
cellulosic
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 had a higher market share than
wool
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.
Wool
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then
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 slightly surpassed
cellulosic
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 between 1990 and 2000, but eventually declined to 1
million
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tons
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 by 2015.
Conversely
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,
cellulosic
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demand
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 increased to 9
million
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tons
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 by 2015.
Overall
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, the data shows a notable rise in
polyester
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demand
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 in the textile industry, particularly after 1995, indicating a clear shift in consumer preference.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, polyester, cellulosic, wool, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demand
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • synthetic fibres
  • natural fibres
  • technological advancements
  • consumer preference
  • economic factors
  • environmental concerns
  • milestone
  • significant increase/decrease
  • comparative analysis
  • highlight
  • period
  • data illustrates
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