The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates
manufacture
of carbonated drinks . Add an article
the manufacture
Overall
, it can be seen that this
linear process go
through 5 main stages which commence with cleaned Change the verb form
goes
water
being heated and carbonated before witnessing a
Correct article usage
apply
fillting
phases in order to be distributed later.
The process starts with the raw Correct your spelling
filling
filleting
water
passing through several machines so as to be filted
and softened . Afterwards , the prepared Correct your spelling
filtered
filled
filed
water
will be pumped into electric heaters before moving on to cooling
pipe . The next step involves Add an article
the cooling
water
go
through Wrong verb form
going
carbonation
part where carbon dioxide will be added to carbonate Correct article usage
the carbonation
water
.
Subsequently
, after the carbonated water
have
been transported to a tank where it will be mixed with various ingredients Correct subject-verb agreement
has
such
as colouring , syrup and flavour , it is then
filtered again before filling them into bottles and cans . The final phase is packaging these filled products and move
them to Wrong verb form
moving
supermarket
in order to be consumedAdd an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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