The diagram below shows how one type if coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparision where relevant.
Contained in the image is information pertaining to the process of producing electricity from coal.
Overall
, can be seen that there are eight steps, commencing with mine and finishing with electricity
At the beginning of the process, coal is exploited from coal mines. The collected coal will be rushed and transported to the gasifier. At this
stage, coal will be transformed into gas by using heat. Subsequently
, the vapour will be cooled and released heat as waste.
Following
this
, the cooled gas undergoes a cleaning process to remove any impurities before being transformed into the vapour power plant. In the final step, electricity will be distributed to households and power stations for various purposes.Submitted by [email protected] on
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