The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the spending of travellers in five different countries visiting New Zealand from 1996 to 2014
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two-year intervals.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Australian tourists
expend
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their money the most compared to others
while
Chinese populations remain in the
last
place except for two years that they surpass British citizens.
To begin
with, the amount of expenditure of Australian people was 1,000 and surged to reach its peak at 2,500 in 2006 before noticeably fluctuating to 2000 in 2014. The USA which was about 800 in the first year went to its highest point, at 1,800, in 2010 and nosedived to 1,300 in 2014.
Moreover
, Great Britain began at a nominal 500 and dropped to a petite 200 in 2002;
besides
, it soared and oscillated to approximately 800 in the year 2014. What is interesting to note is the total spending of the Australia and the UK was different by 2.5 times.
Additionally
, the amount of money of the Japanese population started at nearly 500 and rocketed up to well over 1000 in 2002. A continuous depletion was seen from 2002 to 2014 and arrived at 500.
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Finally
, China which was at a minuscule 100 in 1996 swang to 400
at the end
of the record. What is surprising to see is both China and Japan almost reached the same number in the
last
year, a tiny 100 gap.
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