the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given bar chart illustrates in
details
the portion of consuming Fix the agreement mistake
detail
coffee
and tea among
five Change preposition
in
cities
of
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in
Australian's
individuals. Correct your spelling
Australia's
Overall
, the share of Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
consumer
fresh Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
coffee
in Correct article usage
the last
last
four weeks was the lowest in all Correct article usage
the last
cities
, in comparison Wrong verb form
going
went
to a cafe for Wrong verb form
going
coffee
or tea was the largest and ranked first in all cities
. (expect
in Adelaide which registered at the same fraction via bought instant Correct your spelling
except
coffee
,50%).
Turning to the data in more details
, the figure of Fix the agreement mistake
detail
went
to a cafe for Correct pronoun usage
who went
coffee
and tea in this
category was almost similar in three cities
namely Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart
(which accounted for just over 60 per cent). There was a significant difference between Brisbane and Adelaide, as the former accounted for 55%, Correct word choice
and Hobart
whereas
the share of the latter was lower by a margin of 5%.
The gathered data reveals that,
consumed instant Remove the comma
apply
coffee
in the last
almost one month was approximately the second highest ratio which was a slight disparity between Sydney and Hobart, with figures of approximately, 45%, and 55% respectively. In terms of drinking fresh coffee
, top
two prevalent Correct article usage
the top
cities
were Sydney and Melbourne, as the former contributed just under 45%, while
the figure of the latter was marginally lower (41%). The proportion of Brisbane and Adelaide were the same which was exactly 33%. Moreover
, Hobart comprised 37% of consuming instant coffee
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