the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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details
the portion of consuming Fix the agreement mistake
detail
coffee
and tea Use synonyms
among
five Change preposition
in
cities
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of
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in
Australian's
individuals. Correct your spelling
Australia's
Overall
, the share of Linking Words
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consumers
consumer
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consumers
coffee
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the last
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the last
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coffee
or tea was the largest and ranked first in all Use synonyms
cities
. (Use synonyms
expect
in Adelaide which registered at the same fraction via bought instant Correct your spelling
except
coffee
,50%).
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, the figure of Fix the agreement mistake
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went
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coffee
and tea in Use synonyms
this
category was almost similar in three Linking Words
cities
namely Sydney, Melbourne, Use synonyms
Hobart
(which accounted for just over 60 per cent). There was a significant difference between Brisbane and Adelaide, as the former accounted for 55%, Correct word choice
and Hobart
whereas
the share of the latter was lower by a margin of 5%.
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consumed instant Remove the comma
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coffee
in the Use synonyms
last
almost one month was approximately the second highest ratio which was a slight disparity between Sydney and Hobart, with figures of approximately, 45%, and 55% respectively. In terms of drinking fresh Linking Words
coffee
, Use synonyms
top
two prevalent Correct article usage
the top
cities
were Sydney and Melbourne, as the former contributed just under 45%, Use synonyms
while
the figure of the latter was marginally lower (41%). The proportion of Brisbane and Adelaide were the same which was exactly 33%. Linking Words
Moreover
, Hobart comprised 37% of consuming instant Linking Words
coffee
.Use synonyms
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