The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pictures display the Grange
Park
in Arnold Avenue as it appeared in 1920 and its current appearance.
Overall
, the
park
has two entrances to the north and to the south,
along with
rose gardens. At present, the
park
has more facilities for families and adds natural features. In 1920, the
park
had a fountain in the centre, which has been replaced by a rose garden rounded by four seats. To the west of the map, a stage for musicians was built for performance,
whereas
it has now been removed and an amphitheatre for concerts was in place.
Furthermore
, a new water feature is now located to the south of the
park
replacing the glasshouse.
In addition
, the pond water plants were converted into a children's play area.
In contrast
, the entrances were located in the north and the south remained unchanged.
Finally
, they built an entrance for an underground car
park
to the far south of the
park
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pond
  • northwest corner
  • large central open area
  • residential areas
  • community-oriented space
  • playground
  • eastern border
  • parking lot
  • convenience
  • commercial zone
  • amenities
  • walking path
  • encircles
  • joggers
  • accessible
  • entrances
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