The chart below shows the number of household in the US by their annual income in 2007 ,2011 and 2015 .

The chart below shows the number of household in the US by their annual income in 2007 ,2011 and 2015 .
The bar chart depicts the amount of the
houshold
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household
by annual income in various years. It is clear from the graph that the average amount of
house
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houses
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continuously dominated in 2015 by 1000000 or more.
While
the equivalent figure for
household
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households
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between 75 and 99 ranked the lowest over the period shown.
According to
what is shown, in 2007 the number of
household
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households
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by 1000, 00 or more rose to 29% approximately.
However
, in 2011 the number of
household
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households
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deceased
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decreased
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to 24% nearly
then
sharply increased
above
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30% in 2015.
On the other hand
, the number of
household
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households
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between
50,000to
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50,000 to
74000
remain
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unchanged throughout the
yeaar
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year
years
.
Also
, the
householdls
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households
household
less than 25% remain stable ,
wherease
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whereas
the
household
between 500000 750000
was fluctuated
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during the period of that time .
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words household with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household income
  • income brackets
  • trend analysis
  • income distribution
  • economic policies
  • inflation
  • job market
  • notable shifts
  • overall trend
  • low-income households
  • middle-income households
  • high-income households
  • time periods
  • factors contributing
  • implications
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