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the table bwlow gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

the table bwlow gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The provided table illustrates data about
underground
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the underground
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railway
system
 and it compared
between
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apply
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six cities.
Overall
, the table describes
about
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the
kilometers
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kilometres
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, the
passangers
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passengers
 travelling annually and initiated
year
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a year
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 of the underground
railway
system
.
The
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apply
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Paris and
Tokya
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Tokyo
 have the highest passenger travelling. meanwhile, London covers
largest
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the largest
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number of kilometers
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kilometers
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kilometres
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. As per
information
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the information
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on
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in
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 the table, the oldest underground
railway
system
 is in London and it covers
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a totally
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totally
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total
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394
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of 394
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kilometers
 o
fthe
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the
 route.
whereas
, the passengers travelling
in
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on
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 that route
is
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are
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 775
milllion
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million
 people per
year
.
In contrast
, the newest underground
railway
system
 is in Los
Angles
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Angeles
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. It covers
second
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the second
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 least
kilometer
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kilometre
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 which is 28
kilometers
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kilometres
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 and below 60 million people
are taking
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take
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th
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the
 train annually.
Further
, in Tokyo, it
is
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was
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 initiated in 1927 and consists largest train travelling population with 1927 million people per
year
.
Moreover
, Kyoto
consists
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has
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lowest
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the lowest
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 travelling population in the underground
railway
system
 which covers
lowest
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the lowest
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kilometer
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kilometre
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 which is 11
kilometers
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kilometres
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. the Washington DC
railway
networks
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network
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 was opened in 1976 and
it
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its
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overall
 range is 126
kilometers
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kilometres
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. the passengers travelled annually at 144 million
person
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people
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 per
year
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, system, kilometers, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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