The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010
The
given
chart above illustrates how much the GDP increased per year in three different countries from 2007 to 2010. In general, Verb problem
apply
three
countries had different levels but in 2008, they had close GDP growth levels.
First of all, in 2007, Correct article usage
the three
Tunisia
, which was the most grown country, increased just over percent
of 6. Change the spelling
per cent
Japan
and Ecuador
also
grew, but they were less than Tunisia
. Japan
increased by 2 and Ecuador
rose almost
3 Change preposition
by almost
percent
. In 2008, sorting changed and the most increased Ecuador
rose just under percent
5. The second
one
, Tunisia
, increased between 4 percent
and 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and the third Change the spelling
per cent
one
grew almost
4 Change preposition
by almost
percent
.
In 2009, the most grown Change the spelling
per cent
Japan
increased more
than 5 Change preposition
by more
percent
. Once again, second
Correct article usage
the second
one
, Tunisia
rose just over percent
of 3. Change the spelling
per cent
Ecuador
grew the least in
Change preposition
apply
this
year. In the last
year, the second
one
was Japan
. It grew more than 6 percent
. The second
one
, Tunisia
rose 3
Change preposition
by 3
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
finally
, Ecuador
increased almost
2 Change preposition
by almost
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tunisia, percent, japan, ecuador, second, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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