The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The following graph depicts the changes in the percentage of various electronic devices in the families of the United States between 1995 and 1999. Generally speaking,in

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5-years

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5-year

period, the

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of

household

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households

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with phones had a dramatic jump

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the DVD player experienced a fluctuation

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, but it increased mildly ultimately. Concerning the washing machine, the internet and the computer, they grew constantly from 1995 to 1999. Beginning with washing machines, computers, and phones, they were increased to be the three highest percentages of household devices with over half in 1999. Regarding the washing machine

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rate, there was a slight rise of 20% and reached its peak of 80% after 5 years.

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, the

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of

computer

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computers

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increased slowly from 40% to 60%. Another key feature, the percentage of phones jumped considerably and hit the point

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almost three-quarters of the usage. Turning to the remaining household products, the rate of DVD players and the internet are lower than the three mentioned ones. There were only 10%

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of families

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owned

Internet

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the Internet

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in 1995 and

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proportion gradually climbed to 30% from 1995 to 1998. In the next year, it had a sharp rise to 50%. Concerning the DVD player, there was around 25% in 1995, followed by a gentle drop back to almost 15% and increased continually to 40% in the remaining period.