The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The given pie charts illustrate the sources of annual revenue and expenses
by
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of
USA based
children’s charitable organization.
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USA-based
Overall
, donated food was the main source of fund
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funds
of
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for
this
charitable organization, whereas
they spent most of their money on different program services. According to
the illustration, this
charity the organization earned exactly $53, 561,580 in
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this
year and used up $53,224,896. Their saving in
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this
year has been just over 330,000 dollars.
The majority of the revenue collected was generated by donations of food, which accounted for 86.6%. The contributions of the community and program comprised 10.4% and 2.2%, respectively. All the remaining sources, like government grants, investment contributed
and other income only 0.8% of the total revenue.
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contributions
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, a huge sum of money (95.8%) was consumed by program services, whereas
just 2.6% and 1.6% of the total expenses were spent for
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on
and
management and general services.Correct word choice
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