The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The diagram illustrates the
rate
of Australian
exports
with
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in
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four countries between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, the
rate
of
exports
to
India
and
China
increased,
while
a downward trend was observed in the
rate
of
exports
to
Japan
and the US. Moving to a detailed analysis, the percentage of
exports
to
China
and
India
accounted for 2.5% and 1% of total Australian
exports
, respectively. Over the next 10 years, the rates of
exports
to
China
and
India
doubled. 10 years
after
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, the percentage of
exports
to
China
increased significantly and reached 27%, and the
rate
of
exports
to
India
increased by 6%. From 2010 to the end of the period, export rates with
China
increased and reached the highest
rate
(30%),
whereas
the percentage of
exports
with
India
declined by 2%. In terms of
Japan
and the US, the
rate
of
exports
with the US fluctuated around 12% and 9%,
while
the
rate
of
exports
to
Japan
declined from 27% to 18% between 1990 and 2005. Over the next 7 years, both rates declined by 2% and finished the period at 16% (
Japan
) and 7% (US).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, exports, india, china, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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