You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graphs illustrate the breakdown of monthly temperatures in Paris,
Dubai
and Sydney
.
Overall
, while
the temperature
in Dubai
increased throughout the month, the other two countries remained relatively the same in January
and December. Sydney
experienced the highest temperature
at the beginning of the month while
Paris had a low temperature
.
The degree of hotness and coldness in Dubai
was roughly 24 Celcius in January
. The hotness decreased drastically to nearly 15 Celsius in June, however
, it remained relatively stable in the following three months before increasing sharply to almost 23 Celcius.
In sharp contrast, the coldness in Dubai
and Sydney
stood at around 19 and 5 Celsius respectively in January
. Both countries witnessed a steady increase of about 31 and 15celcius respectively in June and remained the same in the next two months. Surprisingly, the temperatures decreased dramatically by nearly 20 in Dubai
in the month of December with Sydney
having the same temperature
in January
and December.Submitted by boadimaxwell48 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dubai, sydney, temperature, january with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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