The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the breakdown of monthly temperatures in Paris,
Dubai
and Use synonyms
Sydney
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
temperature
in Use synonyms
Dubai
increased throughout the month, the other two countries remained relatively the same in Use synonyms
January
and December. Use synonyms
Sydney
experienced the highest Use synonyms
temperature
at the beginning of the month Use synonyms
while
Paris had a low Linking Words
temperature
.
The degree of hotness and coldness in Use synonyms
Dubai
was roughly 24 Celcius in Use synonyms
January
. The hotness decreased drastically to nearly 15 Celsius in June, Use synonyms
however
, it remained relatively stable in the following three months before increasing sharply to almost 23 Celcius.
In sharp contrast, the coldness in Linking Words
Dubai
and Use synonyms
Sydney
stood at around 19 and 5 Celsius respectively in Use synonyms
January
. Both countries witnessed a steady increase of about 31 and 15celcius respectively in June and remained the same in the next two months. Surprisingly, the temperatures decreased dramatically by nearly 20 in Use synonyms
Dubai
in the month of December with Use synonyms
Sydney
having the same Use synonyms
temperature
in Use synonyms
January
and December.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dubai, sydney, temperature, january with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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