You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graphs illustrate the breakdown of monthly temperatures in Paris,
Dubai
and
Sydney
.
Overall
,
while
the
temperature
in
Dubai
increased throughout the month, the other two countries remained relatively the same in
January
and December.
Sydney
experienced the highest
temperature
at the beginning of the month
while
Paris had a low
temperature
. The degree of hotness and coldness in
Dubai
was roughly 24 Celcius in
January
. The hotness decreased drastically to nearly 15 Celsius in June,
however
, it remained relatively stable in the following three months before increasing sharply to almost 23 Celcius. In sharp contrast, the coldness in
Dubai
and
Sydney
stood at around 19 and 5 Celsius respectively in
January
. Both countries witnessed a steady increase of about 31 and 15celcius respectively in June and remained the same in the next two months. Surprisingly, the temperatures decreased dramatically by nearly 20 in
Dubai
in the month of December with
Sydney
having the same
temperature
in
January
and December.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dubai, sydney, temperature, january with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperature
  • major cities
  • trends
  • temperature changes
  • comparisons
  • yearly pattern
  • geographical location
  • climate zones
  • significant variations
  • notable differences
  • peak temperatures
  • lowest temperatures
  • fluctuations
  • seasonal changes
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