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The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the proportion of
water
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 used for three purposes in six nations in 2001.
Overall
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, agriculture is shared by far the largest in most countries except
Canada
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 and
Australia
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, whose usage of
water
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 for industry and domestic was the highest of all respectively. Starting with the chart for agriculture and industry, the United
Kingdom
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, China and India consumed a large percentage of
water
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 for farming with the United
Kingdom
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 being the most dominant with 90%.
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, Japan used twice as much as
Australia
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 with 66%
while
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Canada
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 used only 5%.
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, the industry was the area that many countries used the least rate of
water
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, for it was less than 10% in the United
Kingdom
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, China,
Australia
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, and India with
Australia
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 accounting for the least at 2%.
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, the country with the largest share of
water
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 usage was
Canada
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 with 32%, which was almost twice as much as that of Japan. Turning to the table for domestic, each nation spent a different percentage of
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.
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, there were higher rates of
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 consumption in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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 with 63%and 65%, followed by Japan and India with 19% and 10% respectively.
On the other hand
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, the United
Kingdom
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 and China had a small proportion with 6% or less.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, canada, australia, kingdom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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