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The line graph shows the percentage of Internet users in three countries from 1999 to 2009.

The line graph shows the percentage of Internet users in three countries from 1999 to 2009.
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The line graph illustrates how many people used the Internet in the USA, Canada and Mexico over a ten-year period between 1999 and 2009. It is noticeable that the percentage of citizens accessing the Internet in all nations registered dramatic upward trends during the surveyed period. Mexico, notably, was considerably less common web surfers compared to the other countries. In the first year 1999, the proportion of inhabitants surfing the Internet in the USA accounted for about 25%, which was roughly 10% higher than
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 Canada. After that, the figures for the USA and Canada saw sharp growths, reaching their peaks of nearly 80% and 100% respectively in the final year. Commencing from 1999, approximately 5% of web users came from Mexico, hitting the lowest point in the year 1999, after which the number increased significantly to around 30% during the following 5 years before peaking at 40% by the end of the period

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