The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia betwween 2009 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the number of migrant
workers
in four distinct jobs in Australia from 2009 to 2012. It can be also
noticed that the unit was measured in thousand
workers
.
Overall
, the number of workers
tended to decline with the exception of computer programmers and accountants. Additionally
, the figure for accountants was the most dominant over the 2009-2012 period.
Turning to the given information, it was clear that accountant
experienced the highest rate in 2010 before Fix the agreement mistake
accountants
decreased
from 28 to 21 Wrong verb form
decreasing
thousand
employees. Moving on cook
, the figure remained stably around 15 to 18 Wrong verb form
to cooking
thousand
workers
through four years.
Therefore
, software
Add an article
a software
engineer
was about as fifth times as computer Fix the agreement mistake
engineers
prgrammer
in 2010, which were 20 and 4 Correct your spelling
programmer
programme
thousand
workers
. Software engineer
increased from 19 to 21 Fix the agreement mistake
engineers
thousand
workers
between 2009 and 2011, before dropped
by 17 Change the form of the verb
dropping
thousand
workers
in 2012, while
computer programmer
experienced a rough rate which remained stably lower than 5 Fix the agreement mistake
programmers
thousand
workers
through out
the period.Correct your spelling
throughout
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