The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of good
river
water quality
in four distinct countries Wales
, Nothern Ireland, England and Scotland from 1990 to 2002.
Overall
, there was an increase in the percentage of quality
of river
water in three countries while
it witnessed a slight decline in Wales
. Additionally
, Wales
had the highest figures but then
in 1999, it was overtaken by the rate of Northern Ireland's river
.
Looking at the figure for Northern Ireland, the percentage of rivers have
good chemical Correct pronoun usage
that have
quality
in N.I was
started at 85%, it remained the same until the year Unnecessary verb
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of
1998 and Change preposition
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then
it experienced a gradual increase to about 97% in 2002. The proportion of water quality
in Wales
country was 95% but it still remained in place until 1998 and then
there was declined slightly to 80% in the last
year of the period.
Moving to England, the rate was 55%,after which it observed a considerable growth to 66% and a final drop to more than 57% in 2002. The Scotland river
rate began at 55%, followed by a dramatical
increase to 55%, but Replace the word
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then
it finally
dropped to 40% in the last
year of the period.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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