The diagram below shows the lifecyle of honey bee.

The diagram below shows the lifecyle of honey bee.
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The flow chart illustrates the development of
Honey
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the Honey
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bee
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during its
live
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cycle.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are 6 distinct stages illustrated in
process
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the process
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. Start with producing the eggs and
ending
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with the development of a
hony
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honey
bee
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. The first stage is when the female lays one or two eggs every three
days
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. It takes 9-10
days
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for the eggs to hatch. After hatching, the small honey
bee
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takes seven
days
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to grow
further
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and another nine
days
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to complete the childhood stage.
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,
after
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this
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period, the honey
bee
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becomes a young adult. It
then
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takes just four
days
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to reach maturity,which
are
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much bigger and more representative.Having completed these steps , the lifecycle will
then
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agin
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begin
.
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