The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
The bar chart compares various means of transport in terms of total mileage covered in the UK over
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10 years.
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, there was an increase in the total distance
traveled
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by
passenger
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over the period
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.
Additionally
, among the six types of vehicles, buses and trains were significantly more popular. Beginning
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in 1990, roughly 40
billion
kilometers
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were
traveled
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by bus users, closely followed by about 35
billion
for railway commuters. Over the
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decade, both the bus and train saw marginal rises in popularity, with the total distance covered increasing by more or less 2
billion
for each. Turning
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less commonly-used modes of transport, in 1990, the number of
kilometers
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traveled
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by motorbike was the highest at about 4
billion
,
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to nearly 3
billion
by bicycle and just under 1
billion
by air. After 10 years, motorbikes and bicycles experienced a decline in levels of usage, with respective figures dropping by around 1
billion
and 2
billion
,
whereas
the figure for air travel increased dramatically by approximately 3
billion
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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