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The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied
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The given bar chart illustrates the median of times that students in five colleges
study
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. The data is measured by hour.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
University
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C
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 has the highest
study
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time
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 on the
weekdays
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 and
University
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 A has the greatest
time
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 for studying at the
weekends
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. It can
also
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 be observed that Universities B and E ARE quite busy on
weekdays
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whereas
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University
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 D has the freest
time
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 in a week. Looking at the
further
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 information, Univesity
C
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 has the largest
study
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time
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 during
weekdays
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 with a total
time
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 is 10,6
hours
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,
while
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 educational institution B is nearly equal with
University
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C
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 with more or less 0,5
hours
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. Regardingly,
University
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 D which has the lowest class
time
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 just needs 0,2
hours
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 to be identical to Academy A,
whereas
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University
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 E is exactly 10
hours
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 on the
weekdays
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. Turning to the remaining statistics,
University
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C
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 has witnessed a slight decline in
weekends
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 with 7,8
hours
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,
while
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University
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 D has seen a dramatic decrease in
study
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time
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 and become the lowest
time
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 with 5,6
hours
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.
Additionally
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,
University
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 E
also
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 fell to 6,2
hours
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 in
weekends
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. Meanwhile,
University
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 A has become the busiest timetable with 9
hours
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 at the
weekends
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,
whereas
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University
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 B has not changed too much in a week.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, university, c, time, weekdays, weekends, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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