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TASK 1: THE TABLE SHOWS THE DISTANCE COVERED IN VARIOUS MODES OF TRANSPORT

TASK 1: THE TABLE SHOWS THE DISTANCE COVERED IN VARIOUS MODES OF TRANSPORT
#distance #modes #transport
The given figure gave information about
amount
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the amount
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 of
kilometres
 which
transports
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transport
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 helped people to move between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
,it can be seen that most of the
tansports
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transports
 increased
about
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 distance and
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the totall
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totall
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total
 of
transports
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transport
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also
 increased over 15 years. Beginning with the
transports
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transport
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 which increased,
fristly
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firstly
, the car which became popular and had the most
different
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difference
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, it increased
form
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from
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 3199
kilometres
 to 4806
kilometres
.
Beside
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,
long distance
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bus
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buses
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 and taxi
were
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rose
drom
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from
 54 to 124 and 13 to 42 respectively. Next with train and other
transports
 were
form
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from
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 289 to 366 and 450 to 585 in that order. Moving on to the lowest difference is
bycicle
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bicycle
 which decreased
form
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from
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 51 to 41.
Similarly
, walking and local
bus
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buses
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 both
also
 decreased in 15 year period, the
kilometres
od
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of
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 walking was
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from
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form
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from
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 255 to 237 and the local bus was
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from
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form
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from
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 428 to 274
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres, transports, form with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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