(QG) The table gives information about the water use in three sections in six countries.

The provided diagram illustrates data on the use of drinks in six countries in three categories. The units are measured in percentage. Generally, agricultural activities need the largest rate of water

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eater intension is lower than 100m3, except in Australia and Canada.

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, water usage in industries was higher than 200m3, China and Russia were the exception. Proving in the table, farming activities in Russia consumed 1863m3, was the highest consumer in six countries. Meanwhile, Australian agriculture uses half of the liquid amount in Russia with only 741m3. Drink usage in Canada, China, Turkey and the United Kingdom

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consumed the most rain in the agriculture sector with 5%, 2%, 5% and 8%, respectively. Turning to domestic water use, Australia topped the chart, using as much as 341m3 of rain.

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, China was the lowest user of liquid with around 26m3, equal to 10 times Australia’s in the similar section.

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