The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five type of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000

The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five type of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000
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bar chart illustrates the five different
type
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types
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of transport in terms of total mileage covered in the UK from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, there was an increase in the total distance travelled by
passenger
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passengers
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over the period examined.
Additionally
, among the six types of
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, buses and trains were significantly more popular. In 1990, roughly 40
billion
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were travelled by bus
driver
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drivers
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, followed by about 35
billion
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railway commuters. Over the following decade, both the bus and train saw marginal rises in popularity, with the total distance covered increasing by more or less 2
billion
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each. Turning to less commonly-used models of transport, in 199, the number of
kilometers
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travelled by motorbike was the highest at about 4
billion
, compared to nearly 3
billion
by bicycle and just 1
billion
by air. After 10 years, motorbikes and bicycles experienced a decline in
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of usage, with respective figures dropping y around 1
billion
and 2
billion
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for air travel increased dramatically by approximately 3
billion
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total distance travelled
  • types of transport
  • timeframe
  • general trend
  • substantial increase
  • substantial decrease
  • compared to
  • notably
  • overall
  • over the decade
  • data breakdown
  • highest
  • lowest
  • observed trend
  • future trends
  • passenger distance
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