task 1. the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below give statistical information on
housework
in one
country from 1920 to 2019. The first one
illustrates the percentage of households
with electrical appliances
such
as washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. The second Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
one
shares the number of hours
the average household spends on
working around the house per week.
Change preposition
apply
First,
the line graphs on electrical appliances
illustrates
that the percentage of Change the verb form
illustrate
households
using washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners generally rose over the years
. Interestingly, those utilising refrigerators started at nearly 0% in the 1920s, increasing rapidly over the next forty years
until all households
owned one
in the 1980s. Meanwhile, the percentage of families using vacuum cleaners was initially
30% and increased steadily until all of them possessed one
in the 2000s. Finally
, while
around 40% of homes had a washing machine in the 1920s, this
figure surprisingly never reached 100% over the next century.
Next,
the line graph on housework
in this
country had a downward trend over the same hundred years
. Households
started with a staggering fifty hours
a week maintaining their homes in the 1920s. Likely due to
the introducing
of the aforementioned Replace the word
introduction
elctrical
Correct your spelling
electrical
appliances
, the number of hours
gradually declined until reaching a low of ten hours
a week in 2019.
The two diagrams demonstrated figures on households
with electrical appliances
and how much time they put towards housework
over one
hundred years
. There appears to be a negative correlation between the two as the number of homes with electrical devices increased at the same time the time they did housework
decreased during that period.Submitted by asllchkied on
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