task 1. the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below give statistical information on
housework
in Use synonyms
one
country from 1920 to 2019. The first Use synonyms
one
illustrates the percentage of Use synonyms
households
with electrical Use synonyms
appliances
Use synonyms
such
as washing Linking Words
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. The second Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
one
shares the number of Use synonyms
hours
the average household spends Use synonyms
on
working around the house per week.
Change preposition
apply
First,
the line graphs on electrical Linking Words
appliances
Use synonyms
illustrates
that the percentage of Change the verb form
illustrate
households
using washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners generally rose over the Use synonyms
years
. Interestingly, those utilising refrigerators started at nearly 0% in the 1920s, increasing rapidly over the next forty Use synonyms
years
until all Use synonyms
households
owned Use synonyms
one
in the 1980s. Meanwhile, the percentage of families using vacuum cleaners was Use synonyms
initially
30% and increased steadily until all of them possessed Linking Words
one
in the 2000s. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
while
around 40% of homes had a washing machine in the 1920s, Linking Words
this
figure surprisingly never reached 100% over the next century.
Linking Words
Next,
the line graph on Linking Words
housework
in Use synonyms
this
country had a downward trend over the same hundred Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
Households
started with a staggering fifty Use synonyms
hours
a week maintaining their homes in the 1920s. Likely Use synonyms
due to
the Linking Words
introducing
of the aforementioned Replace the word
introduction
elctrical
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electrical
appliances
, the number of Use synonyms
hours
gradually declined until reaching a low of ten Use synonyms
hours
a week in 2019.
The two diagrams demonstrated figures on Use synonyms
households
with electrical Use synonyms
appliances
and how much time they put towards Use synonyms
housework
over Use synonyms
one
hundred Use synonyms
years
. There appears to be a negative correlation between the two as the number of homes with electrical devices increased at the same time the time they did Use synonyms
housework
decreased during that period.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, one, households, appliances, hours, years with synonyms.
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