The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps display the
road
access to a
city
hospital in 2007 and how it looked in 2010.
Overall
, the layout of roads has been updated with the bus station changing location,
then
adding several roundabouts to provide more mobility and availability for people.
In addition
, the parking has been dissected into two categories with relocating
the
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one: for staff, and
for
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one for
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public
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the public
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. Starting at
the
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City
Road
, in the south,
instead
of a crossroad as it had been before there has been
adhered
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a roundabout on the way to Hospital
Road
towards
north
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the north
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.
Following
this
, on the right side
from
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the
road
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the car park for staff takes place,
whereas
previously it was suited for both workers and locals.
In contrast
, the public car park
has taken
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place on
northern-east
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the northern-east
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side
from
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city
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the city
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hospital. Across the parking, on the other side of the
road
, the bus station has been moved from the far east point and
gave
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place between
Ring
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the Ring
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road
that
surround
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city
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the city
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hospital and
City
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the City
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road
. To allow more accessibility for people the bus station
have
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two branches with the one leading to the first roundabout of
City
Road
and the second connecting with the Ring
road
, which circles the
city
hospital.
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