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‏The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table provides information about the amount of
water
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 expenditure for various purposes in different nations. It is clear from the graph that the agricultural
sector
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 had the largest
percentage
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 of
water
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 used in most countries.
While
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 the equivalent figure for the
use
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 of
water
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 in industrial sectors ranked the lowest in most regions .
According to
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 what is shown, in Australia the amount of
use
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 the
water
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 in domestic
field
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 had the highest
percentage
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 about 65%
whereas
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 the ratio of
water
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 consumed in the industry
field
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 reached 32%.
However
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, the
percentage
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 of
water
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use
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 for the Agricultural
sector
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 became the lowest.
On the other hand
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, in the UK industrial and domestic had the same estimated rate of
water
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 consumption.
By contrast
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, the agricultural
field
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 had the most significant
percentage
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 of
water
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use
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.
Moreover
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, the
water
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use
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 of the agricultural
sector
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 in China was 87. In comparison, the ratio of
water
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use
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 in two other sectors plummeted to 7 % and 6% respectively. There was the lowest amount of
water
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use
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 in the industrial
sector
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 in Australia.
Also
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, the rate of
water
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use
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 for domestic purposes climbed to 65% .
Additionally
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, the rate of
water
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use
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 in the agriculture
field
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 represented the highest in India and Japan.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, sector, percentage, use, field with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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