The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

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The table

illustrate

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the main

transportaion

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transportation

points in different populations in 2007. the figure shows

number

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a number

the number

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of people using

rail

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transport

excepet

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except

metro

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the metro

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measured in million, passenger

kilometer

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kilometre

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per

headm

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head

and

finally

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, cargo carried

calucated

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calculated

in billions of tons. The citizens of Malaysia

are

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have

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the highest rate in

term

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terms

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of using

rail

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transport,

while

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Canadian

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Canadians

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are

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have

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the

lowerest

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lowest

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amount of using

rail

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transport.

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, Malaysian

passengers

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kilometer

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kilometers

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are 770.

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canada

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Canada

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population

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populations

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are the

minimute

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minimum

minute

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thier

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usage

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only 80.

Moreover

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, China

have

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the

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most dominate

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dominate

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dominant

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passengers

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per kilometer

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kilometer

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kilometre

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with

number

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a number

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of 1980.

Additionally

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, more than 23 are carried by cargo.

Furthermore

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, United Arab

Emarates

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Emirates

citiziens

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citizens

who

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apply

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use trail

pathway

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pathways

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are more than 5 million,

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, 780 are passengers.

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also

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more than 21

tone

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are carried by cargo.

To sum up

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, there is a wide range of

rail

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transportaion

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transportation

and amount of people that

using

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it.

For

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instance

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instance,

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chainese

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chains

are using different types, and in various amounts and numbers.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rail with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
36
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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